Not sure if this is the correct place for this piece.
May move it to scraps
So i sat another test on Friday and finished early and wrote this.
EDIT: Well this is not going to scraps the piece is growing on em and i kinda like it now.
So i posted it on SFF World.com and got a bit of feedback from some friends of mine and made a few subtle changes . . .mainly to the 4th stanza.